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[Triset]

Ordinary

It lacks originality. Thats all there is to it. The only thing you really changed was the following bubbles or whatever they were and they were done poorly. If you are going to fix up this game make sure you make the effects better and add something NEVER BEFORE SEEN!

4/10

-Sterockicy-

kevs91 responds:

Well, since I'm just starting out with flash, I kinda had two things going at once. The other thing, which is taking me forever and is a bit over my head, is something I've never seen before, but I'm going to try to keep the same bubbly, happy style.

You know, for kicks. :).

Thanks for the review.

[Toki Doll]

Just your average Dress up game.

It is a nice drawing of the girl and the clothes but it lacks originality. Its been done over and over again simply because they are the easiest games to create. Make something original about it. Make it your own. Make the objects clip on to the body not to just go over them. I may bring out a tutorial on how to do that if it will get rid of every making repetative games.

5/10

-Sterockicy-

HappyAlarm responds:

I would really really love a tutorial on this! I'm sorry that you didn't fine this satisfying and appriciate the critique. I am not the most flash savvy person in the world. obviously o-o The reason this is so lame is because it's technically incomplete. I explained this in my commentary, but for some reason it never showed up >_< I did this months ago, and am planning on doing a much better one.

[halloween clock game]

Yeeha

i got to level 5 that is really fun!

HoboPorn responds:

That would be good if there was a lvl 5 XD

[Fatal Distance]

Ok

its an ok game but there is a few probs. 1 the menu at the start is stupid because the text you have written is set to input text meaning all the player has to do is click on the text and he or she can change wat it says. fix that. if you dont know how ask me. also bad spelling. and finally the sticks you shoot are well hidden but if you shoot them twice it goes back to normal add a stop action or something to the end of it so that cannot happen. other than that keep makin cause its a good start

DarthKendrick responds:

Thanx, I am taking your advice and am working to fix the enemies and thnx for the heads up on the text at first i couldn't figure it out but after u told me it was set to input I found it in the propertis menu.