Nice!
Really nice song! The idea of having that slow build up was great and nine out of ten times it sounds awesome. One problem I found with your build up intro was it sort of sounded out of tune to me. Its probably just me but that was the only flaw I could find. The rest sounded great. Good guitaring and drumming. To me the song sounded like something bullet for my valentine would make, minus the lyrics of course. I like bullet for my valentine so therefore I found that I liked this as well.
Good work!
-Sterockicy-